{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"62621934","dateCreated":"1369751039","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"LYuan2222","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/LYuan2222","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369057450\/LYuan2222-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62621934"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ashvin and Allan","description":"You guys had strong vocabulary. You also had long paragraphs. However, you had too many longish lists. Makes it really boring to read. Don't have to change. Just giving advice","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63168074","body":"I think the vocab was good but the end was a little week. maybe put some strong vocab towards the end","dateCreated":"1369753576","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"jawittrock","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jawittrock","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62621878","dateCreated":"1369750800","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"assial","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/assial","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62621878"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Lucas and Joseph","description":"It is very short, and needs more detail regarding how it is presented. You should add more knowledge regarding your three civilizations.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62611892","dateCreated":"1369694131","smartDate":"May 27, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"Khaff","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Khaff","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62611892"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Kayla and Arya","description":"I think that you used good word choice and your paragraphs flowed together very well. Though in the first sentence you said and twice and you also, in the second sentence, you used improper grammar and wrote a civilization not civilizations. Overall I think that you wrote a very cohesive paragraph!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63168988","body":"Thanks Kaylee, we will make those changes!<br \/>\nKayla","dateCreated":"1369754918","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"kbyrne22","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kbyrne22","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574882","dateCreated":"1369407286","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"vsclafani1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/vsclafani1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574882"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback Lucas Joseph","description":"You had good information now all you need to do is compare more. Maybee make it a little longer.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574784","dateCreated":"1369407105","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"evukajlovic","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/evukajlovic","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574784"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Lucas and Joseph","description":"Hey guys! I really like your paragraph. It is interesting, but you should be able to give more information and a little more detail. What really interests me was that the Romans kept bees. You could also tell how the Romans kept these bees.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574732","dateCreated":"1369407019","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"steven_miedona","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/steven_miedona","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574732"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"arya and kayla","description":"You have some grammatical errors.  But your paragraph has very well explain details.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63093734","body":"Why thank you Steven. We will fix the grammatical errors.","dateCreated":"1369407061","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"achawla","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/achawla","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574644","dateCreated":"1369406804","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"achawla","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/achawla","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574644"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Allan and Ashvin","description":"The ending was a little sudden. There was no concluding sentence.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574622","dateCreated":"1369406728","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"zgriff","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/zgriff","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574622"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Allan and Ashvin Review","description":"I would recommend adding some more detail and possibly some pictures. Besides that it has great vocabulary","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574536","dateCreated":"1369406309","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"mjCook123","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mjCook123","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574536"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Lucas and Joseph ","description":"This does have solid information but I would have so what who cares in the conclusion","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574496","dateCreated":"1369406159","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"2015004","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/2015004","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574496"},"dateDigested":1532766642,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Lucas Joseph","description":"Don't repeat everything you already say. Try to think of more ways they were different.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63168146","body":"maybe try to use some stronger vocab that will help you bring everything together more","dateCreated":"1369753726","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"jawittrock","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jawittrock","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}