{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"62622918","dateCreated":"1369753922","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"kbyrne22","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kbyrne22","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622918"},"dateDigested":1532766615,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Zach and Nader","description":"You guys had a very good essay! I liked that fact that you used words like "scorching" and really explained each similarity and difference. You had very good facts in each paragraph as well. I think that if you put where in each country the mountains and rivers and such were it would make your essay even better.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62622832","dateCreated":"1369753687","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"achawla","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/achawla","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622832"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Zach and Nader","description":"I really like how you added in pictures. When you were describing the similarities, you kept on saying "Mesopotamia, India, and Greece have\/has..." which was kind of boring to read.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62622174","dateCreated":"1369751520","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"assial","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/assial","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622174"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"MJ and Brendan","description":"It is very good and provides prominent infomation, but the sentences are choppy and you need somewhat better vocab. Other than that, it is very enjoyable to read. It would also appeal to the reader if you added pictures","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62621902","dateCreated":"1369750910","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"gamecreed3","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/gamecreed3","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62621902"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Mj and Brendan","description":"You guys did a good job overall. You guys should add some more similarities that include describing Rome's geography.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62610356","dateCreated":"1369685631","smartDate":"May 27, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"simam7898","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/simam7898","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62610356"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Mj and Brendan Feedback","description":"Mj and Brendon, you had some mistakes in your paragraph. The first one is that you didn't explain on some subjects of what something is and makes the reader a little confused","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574952","dateCreated":"1369407411","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"kbyrne22","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kbyrne22","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574952"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Mj and Brendan","description":"Good job explaining each similarity and difference. You also did a good job saying which river and landmark goes to which country. YOu also had some grammatical errors. Good job overall though!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574894","dateCreated":"1369407331","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"evukajlovic","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/evukajlovic","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574894"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"MJ and Brandon","description":"Nice details about how water was important to the environment. The paragraph could use a little more details.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574800","dateCreated":"1369407135","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"sarah_berg2","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sarah_berg2","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574800"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Kya and Itanella","description":"The information you have given was a little repetitive and you spelled Pompeii wrong in the paragraph. This shows that you need to put more time and effort into this it isn't very accurate. You should probably get more similarities and differences at least 3 and explain them more. If you state what mountain range Greece has then explain what all of the others have. It isn't very clear when you just leave things hanging. It needs a little work!
\nSincerely,
\nSarah Berg","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574738","dateCreated":"1369407052","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"lukeflaska","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/lukeflaska","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574738"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"MJ and Brendan","description":"Try to add more similarities and differences. Also, add a visual aid or some pictures please. Go into depth with your facts.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574700","dateCreated":"1369406963","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"adoromal","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/adoromal","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574700"},"dateDigested":1532766616,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"MJ and Brendan","description":"Nice job guys. You could use a few more similarities and differences, because your essay is pretty short.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}