{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"62633982","dateCreated":"1369800856","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"Ashiraz1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ashiraz1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62633982"},"dateDigested":1532766574,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Vincent and Ali","description":"good intro rather than saying they had different lifestyle
\nSecond sentence is not essential because it is obvious
\nNeed better transitions in to different topics
\ngood research, I can tell most sentences were paraphrased
\namount of information given is enough
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\nThe Explanations you gave about compare\/contrast are solid and reasonable but just make some better transitions and take out unneccesary sentences that are obvious. Everything else is good","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62630080","dateCreated":"1369780825","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"takin1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/takin1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62630080"},"dateDigested":1532766574,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Kabir and Joe","description":"Good work on the essay. I like how it all flows together. You could use some more information for each point.
\nYou guys did awesome!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62623038","dateCreated":"1369754339","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"achawla","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/achawla","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62623038"},"dateDigested":1532766574,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Eva and Rawshan","description":"There were some typos. The paragraphs were a little choppy.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62623036","dateCreated":"1369754331","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"kbyrne22","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kbyrne22","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62623036"},"dateDigested":1532766574,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Eva and Rawshan","description":"Good job overall with your essay! You had some capitalizeation errors but I loved your higher vocabulary choices and your similarities and differences were very intresting. Great Job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63168650","body":"*capitalization","dateCreated":"1369754347","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"kbyrne22","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kbyrne22","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62623002","dateCreated":"1369754194","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"kbyrne22","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kbyrne22","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62623002"},"dateDigested":1532766574,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Vincent and Ali","description":"You guys had some errors in your paragraphs including words that were left out in sentences and spaces missing. There was also some words with too many capital letters in them like "THere". Your essay was also one giant link to the wiki spaces home page which was confusing. I'm not sure if you meant to do that. Your essay was very factual though and you guys had some interesting similarities and differences.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62622980","dateCreated":"1369754096","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"achawla","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/achawla","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622980"},"dateDigested":1532766574,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Vincent and Ali","description":"I didn't understand why it was a link. Also, the differences weren't contrasting. They were just stating each country's way of life, but not really showing how they were different.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62622912","dateCreated":"1369753894","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"evukajlovic","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/evukajlovic","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622912"},"dateDigested":1532766575,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Kaylee, Kristina, Mia","description":"Great job. You had a lot of information on your draft. It was interesting.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62611328","dateCreated":"1369691666","smartDate":"May 27, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"KristinaSmola","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KristinaSmola","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62611328"},"dateDigested":1532766575,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ali and Vincent","description":"I found your paragraphs very informative. Some of the sentences in your paragraphs were choppy and not quite clear. I feel you need to add a bit more detail on the information in your paragraphs, to spruce it up a bit.I think you should introduce and conclude your paragraphs a bit better. I like what I read. Great job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574990","dateCreated":"1369407509","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"adoromal","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/adoromal","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574990"},"dateDigested":1532766575,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Vincent and Ali","description":"Nice job guys but I'm not sure all facts are true. Make it longer by adding more similarities and differences.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574864","dateCreated":"1369407242","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"Rrrasha","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Rrrasha","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574864"},"dateDigested":1532766575,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Steven And Luke","description":"I really liked your paragraph! Some cons are you guys kept on repeating. Also you guys can add more similarities and differences. Also you guys could've explained a little more. Some pros are I really liked how you put a visual it was really nice to see how it looked like. Also I loved how it was not too short or too long. Also I loved how you defined the word Toga so we can understand more. Overall I really liked your paragraph but I wished you included more and had a better topic sentence and an intro. But anyway good job!!!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}