{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"62623190","dateCreated":"1369755101","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"vsclafani1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/vsclafani1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62623190"},"dateDigested":1532766523,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Safi and Ahmad","description":"Great info but there is no comparing or contrasting. All you need to do is compare all of your great information and you are set.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63169204","body":"WOW THANKS","dateCreated":"1369755153","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"SafiZakerAbdulQadir","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/SafiZakerAbdulQadir","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369754355\/SafiZakerAbdulQadir-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"63188372","body":"I will do that","dateCreated":"1369801603","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"Ashiraz1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ashiraz1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"63188468","body":"Thanks for the Great Feedback. we will make a change and link the compare\/contrast to the other civilizations. It was great that you reminded us about a major part of our grade.","dateCreated":"1369802055","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"Ashiraz1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ashiraz1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62622318","dateCreated":"1369751844","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"gamecreed3","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/gamecreed3","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622318"},"dateDigested":1532766523,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Safi and Ahmad","description":"You guys had a lot of information. Try adding an intro paragraph that summarizes what you guys are describing.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63169062","body":"GAMECRREED 3????","dateCreated":"1369755033","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"SafiZakerAbdulQadir","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/SafiZakerAbdulQadir","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369754355\/SafiZakerAbdulQadir-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"63188410","body":"Will edit it","dateCreated":"1369801824","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"Ashiraz1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ashiraz1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62622278","dateCreated":"1369751766","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"ali196","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ali196","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622278"},"dateDigested":1532766523,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Rithik and Angela","description":"Your essay is decent but there are some pretty big flaws in it. An example of a flaw is that you talk about China majorly but you don't put much information about the Middle Ages. Another flaw that exists within the essay is that, you list obvious differences such the social structures are different from eachother. Lastly, you have to add a conclusion to your essay because there is none.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62622114","dateCreated":"1369751389","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"jposkin","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jposkin","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622114"},"dateDigested":1532766523,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Cade & Daniel","description":"To make your paragraphs better, I think you should add a conclusion sentence to sum up all your facts. Also, your paragraph doesn't show the similarities and differences between the civilizations so blend all of your facts together and describe why they are similar or different.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62622040","dateCreated":"1369751220","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"daniel734","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/daniel734","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62622040"},"dateDigested":1532766523,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sam and Sarah","description":"You guys did a good job on the information, but I think that the paragraph was a bit too short. Also, you should add a concluding sentence to sum up everything.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63168118","body":"Ok thanks we will do that. It really needs a concluding sentence!","dateCreated":"1369753668","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"sarah_berg2","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sarah_berg2","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62621964","dateCreated":"1369751103","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"ali196","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ali196","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62621964"},"dateDigested":1532766523,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Daniel and Cade","description":"Your essay was great and full of information but there were some flaws. You might want to add conclusions to the paragraphs because you don't have any. But overall, the vocabulary and word choice was good.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"62580082","dateCreated":"1369424667","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"sborok","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sborok","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62580082"},"dateDigested":1532766523,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Rithik and Angela","description":"Good facts, but it may be better to organize the structure of the paragraphs. Maybe make it look more normal, and consists of many grammatical errors. Overall, nice job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63167020","body":"Ok! Thank you for the feedback.","dateCreated":"1369751699","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"ahan12169","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ahan12169","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574814","dateCreated":"1369407201","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"IshaSingh23","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/IshaSingh23","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574814"},"dateDigested":1532766524,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sam and Sarah","description":"Good job! I love how you included the two visuals with the writing. However, try to explain the similarities and differences between the three civilizations in depth a bit more. Also, try to add more of an introduction and conclusion. It will help make the writing flow more. Very good information. I liked the similarities and differences of how royalty was at the top, and slaves were at the bottom. Overall, great job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63168064","body":"Thanks Isha and we will work on going back in depth with it. Also we will make an intro and conclusion with it too. Thanks for the advice.","dateCreated":"1369753561","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"sarah_berg2","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sarah_berg2","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574614","dateCreated":"1369406658","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"bchow2","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bchow2","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574614"},"dateDigested":1532766524,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Safi and Ahmad","description":"You guys have good info, but you should compact it into one paragraph, and you should do more comparing and contrasting. Not just doing the social structures of the civilizations.<br \/>\nBrendan","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63093460","body":"THANKS MAN","dateCreated":"1369406705","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"SafiZakerAbdulQadir","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/SafiZakerAbdulQadir","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1369754355\/SafiZakerAbdulQadir-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"63188392","body":"Thanks for the idea of one paragraph","dateCreated":"1369801686","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"Ashiraz1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ashiraz1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"62574574","dateCreated":"1369406478","smartDate":"May 24, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"achawla","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/achawla","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bjhcivilizations.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/62574574"},"dateDigested":1532766524,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sam and Sarah","description":"It was kind of confusing when it went form similarity to difference to similarity to difference, and so on.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"63168272","body":"Do you mean to have information leading up to the topic","dateCreated":"1369753886","smartDate":"May 28, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"sarah_berg2","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sarah_berg2","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}